Tuesday, March 9, 2010

Saath

Ankhon me uski bhi dard bhara tha,
Magar naseeb ka shayad yahi khel tha,
Har pal saath diya jisne,
Aaj wo humse mu mod kar chala tha,
Dil par uske bojh tha phir bhi,
Wo mujhe rula kar chala tha..
Mere saamne meri tasveer mita kar,
Phir wo use jodne chala tha,
Ankho me uski ab bhi dard bhara tha,
Magar naseeb ka shayad yehi khel tha…

7 comments:

  1. दर्द को परिभाषित करने का अच्छा प्रयास है!शायद आत्म अनुभूति का असर है!Nice reading,good effort!

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  2. really nice one....close to my heart

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  3. @ ktheLeo:
    Thank you.. Keep visiting!!

    @ Ashish Awasthi:
    Really?? Hmmmmmm.... Thanks..

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  4. "Mere saamne meri tasveer mita kar" --- good line... very touchy!

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  5. @ Dimps:
    Thanks dear.. Keep visiting..

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  6. i'm sure u'll take the stage in any of these "Kavi sammelan"

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  7. @ nike:
    Thats a long way, and thanks for reading!!

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